It really did express the same feeling that marely fest had. I especially like the photo with the blurry lights, and your truthful commentary about it. I wish you would have had more pictures though. It was a very short essay. The sound was good, and your voice is strangely calming. The only thing I really would have changed about your essay is for you to have taken more pictures, showing a whole day at marley fest, and what's up with not taking any pictures of the bands? It was very well organized, too.
I totally loved this photo essay. I loved all the photos but the photo of the blurry lights really summed it all up. haha The sound came out good and all so you get points for that. The only advice would be to have a few more photos included in the essay but i think it's just awesome anyways. You did really well. *high five*
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I give this an 8.
It really did express the same feeling that marely fest had. I especially like the photo with the blurry lights, and your truthful commentary about it. I wish you would have had more pictures though. It was a very short essay. The sound was good, and your voice is strangely calming. The only thing I really would have changed about your essay is for you to have taken more pictures, showing a whole day at marley fest, and what's up with not taking any pictures of the bands? It was very well organized, too.
I totally loved this photo essay. I loved all the photos but the photo of the blurry lights really summed it all up. haha The sound came out good and all so you get points for that. The only advice would be to have a few more photos included in the essay but i think it's just awesome anyways. You did really well. *high five*
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