This is a very well done electronic essay. The narration is very informative, and helps tell the parts of the story that the pictures can't, like recognizing who made the pieces in the final shot, which I thought was very nice of him. The pictures are overall very good, with good candid faces on the subjects, but there was one picture in particular of the teacher showing the class something, where you can't see the teacher's face and you can barely see the student in the foreground's face, so the picture is kind of boring, with no emotion or reaction in it. But other than that, I think it is an excellent job. -Emma
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This is a very well done electronic essay. The narration is very informative, and helps tell the parts of the story that the pictures can't, like recognizing who made the pieces in the final shot, which I thought was very nice of him. The pictures are overall very good, with good candid faces on the subjects, but there was one picture in particular of the teacher showing the class something, where you can't see the teacher's face and you can barely see the student in the foreground's face, so the picture is kind of boring, with no emotion or reaction in it. But other than that, I think it is an excellent job.
-Emma
The narration is very well done for your essay. It's very informative. Overall the photos are good and you covered the subject well. Nice job, Haza.
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